With the addition of material from Chris Hamacher and the diligent efforts of web master, The Rev. Kobutsu Malone, the Internet page devoted to Kyudo Nakagawa Roshi has grown.
Thanks to both.
And if anyone reading this has any old talks, photos, calligraphy or other memorabilia relating to Kyudo, I hope you will consider passing them along for possible inclusion.
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Dear Adam
ReplyDeleteSome grammatical (editorial??) errors for your attention:
Para 6. Starts with 'But some people only have an intellectual appreciation.'
Line 3 - hides0 (sic)
Para 8. Starts with 'It's like this.'
Line 5 - your eyes don't retired (sic)
Line 6 - foes on strike (sic)
Line 9 - pass
Para 9. Starts with 'But you know'
Line 6 - they (sic)
Para 12. Starts with 'You have to know how brown rice is better.'
Line 9 - our (sic)
Para 13.
Line 9 - like (sic)
Para 16.
Line 4 - I take care what I get
Or please pass along to relevant person for perusal. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteArticle - Fourth day Teisho
ReplyDeletePara 2, line 1 and 2 - No connection you and Buddha.
Para 2, line 4 - tine (sic)
Para 7, line 1 - "It" you have some..
Para 15, line 5 - Therefore, there is no need for hesitation "of" pride or complaining.
Para 17, line 1 - Las (sic)
Para 19, line 8 - In any place, in any "even"
Para 24, line 7 - the (sic)
These are nice, thanks for posting the link.
ReplyDeleteDear "Anonymous" -- Many thanks (he growled) for the corrections which I have done my best (not perfect, but my best) to implement.
ReplyDeleteVery kind of you.
Finally !! you praise me...
ReplyDeleteCheerio S.